Section 6.1 (Resource Exhaustion attacks) opens with:
A malicious client can achieve cause highly asymmetric resource
usage at the proxy by colluding with a destination server...
"achieve cause" looks like an editing artifact two verbs where one
is intended. Suggest simply:
A malicious client can cause highly asymmetric resource usage at the
proxy by colluding with a destination server...
(draft-ietf-httpbis-connect-tcp-11, Section 6.1)
Section 6.1 (Resource Exhaustion attacks) opens with:
"achieve cause" looks like an editing artifact two verbs where one
is intended. Suggest simply:
(draft-ietf-httpbis-connect-tcp-11, Section 6.1)